Unfinished Band Piece

Hey guys.  This is one of my first pieces that I can see really turning into something I like, but I've run myself into a corner.  I'd like to see what you think and I would love it if you had any suggestions regarding how to continue the piece.  Thanks!

Alright, it took some messing around, but I finally figured out how to make my file into an mp3.  I hope this one works.

Hi Charlie. I think there may be some kind of problem with your upload. When I attempt to download it, I get an error message saying "We could not locate the item you are trying to view"

Same problem here. Any scores or audio that we can use?

I hope the new file works for you guys.  Thanks lots.

The first part sounds like the soundtrack of a popular film, of which I do nlt know the name at the moment. I like the harmonies.

The second part is a huge contrast with the first part. Maybe too big? I don't know. . . I like this part as well. Its vivid, exciting atmosphere is nice. When you have run yourself into a corner, stop writing for this piece until you have inspiration again. You could try to develop some themes and motives.

Providing feedback without a score is pretty hard, but I have tried my best.

First, i really like the vibe in general of your composition, i don´t know why it remembered me a bit of star wars i don´t know if it was just me haha

I feel like there is something missing between the first and second part so that those two parts can really get along well, because it feels like a very rough range 

I also feel the pattern that goes from 1:12 to 1:25 repeats maybe a little too much?...

Anyways great work!
I think it has a lot of potential!