Donethur Posted September 8, 2017 Posted September 8, 2017 (edited) Pelase your feedback. Short theme inspired in folk music. thanks! https://soundcloud.com/donethur/theme-for-piano-4-dance Edited September 8, 2017 by Donethur Quote
Monarcheon Posted September 9, 2017 Posted September 9, 2017 0:09 - bizarre resolution with the VI vs. i harmonic rhythm, along a weird melody. 0:49 - normally V chords don't use 11's. Same problems in the G minor section. Ending is weak, especially after a polyrhythmic crescendo. Generally good, with interesting consistency in both hands. Quote
Donethur Posted September 10, 2017 Author Posted September 10, 2017 (edited) Thanks for the feedback. Ilv: it is thanks to your feedback actually (and Monarcheon), I tried to do most of what you recommended. BTW I just ended this one, hope you like it :) Edited September 10, 2017 by Donethur Quote
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