Morning Waves

Morning Waves

This sounds almost though it was improvised. The notes are kind of uneven and the chord progression doesn't always fit the patterns you've already established. 
I - I phrase chord progressions are almost always awkward in C major. It doesn't really help that you have a tendency to throw in dissonances where none are really necessary and it throws off the power of those kinds of moments. Suspensions in here also seem to be less effective if something resolved from a 13th or 7th, especially with added dissonance. 

Thank you for the thorough analysis, this really helps !