Peter Crow Composer Posted September 16, 2017 Posted September 16, 2017 I am really curious to your thoughts on this track! apart from the ugly cello samples, some mastering screw ups and way too many slides, I am quite happy with it. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu phantom > next Quote
Monarcheon Posted September 16, 2017 Posted September 16, 2017 I'm with you on the slides, I think. Save 'em for the dramatic points. 0:40 - D minor with the minor 13th, risky. 0:44 - Dm/C/Bb, doesn't function like a polychord and ends up sounding like a Dm/C9 which isn't exactly what you want. This pattern repeats a few times. 1:11 - Unexpected, but very welcome change, nice. The drums could be mixed a little better and could be lengthened, and would be a perfect place to change up the chord progression to build drama. Maybe a III chord or IV or Vsus or something. I kind of wanted it to end, but a loop is cool too, I suppose. Generally, pretty good stuff. 1 Quote
Luis Hernández Posted September 16, 2017 Posted September 16, 2017 Apart from those technical issues that Monarcheon describe pretty well, the music is beautiful. Yes, the change with incoming drums is a plus. Quote
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