Charon

Dear All,

I'd like to hear about your opinions on this song. Thanks for your comments in advance! 

Charon1.mp3

The only part that bothered me was the opening. A lot of it sounded prefunctional (ii/V) but never led to a specific place, especially with the feigned dominant chord in the left hand.
The other thing is that the orchestration with the left hand in the repeated note sections felt a lot less fluid than the rest of the piece. 
But this is really nice to listen to... don't leave me hanging on the dominant though!