1st Symphony 1st movement

Hello Guys, 

I decided, I compose a symphony. This is the first movement, when will be ready the whole composition, I'm gonna make a score. Share your opinion with me! :) 

Could you please share a score?

Just now, Maarten Bauer said:

Could you please share a score?

 

I can't share the score, because it isn't ready yet. :) 

Just now, OliverKovacs said:

I can't share the score, because it isn't ready yet. :) 

 

Alright, then I will review it when the score is ready.

4 minutes ago, Maarten Bauer said:

Alright, then I will review it when the score is ready.

 

Okay, but I don't understand your question, I wrote I'll make the score when I'll be ready with all movements. 

2 minutes ago, OliverKovacs said:

Okay, but I don't understand your question, I wrote I'll make the score when I'll be ready with all movements. 

 

Ah! Now I understand your comment.
Well, the reason why I ask you for the score of only this movement is because it helps a lot to review while reading and listening to the music.
Then I can give you more detailed feedback.

The melody in the beginning is lovely.
In the first part I miss some lower bass notes.
The music just sounds too repetitive for me in the first part.
Giving the melody to the cellos could solve this problem and some pizzicato notes in the basses can help too.

In my opinion you can do more with the strings regarding melodic material. The orchestration is nice.
The development of the melody is good, but you can do a lot more with the motives in this theme.
The developments often just sound like repetitions of the theme.

Well done and I am looking forward to the other movements (with score :P)