Revive

Hi,

This is one of my compositions.

Revive promo tune.mp3

It would mean a great deal to me if I could get some feedback.

Feel free to share your opinions with me.

Nice! I hear some promise in here. The sounds you're using are nice and fairly well balanced. Your changes and "impact" moments are well spaced and have the right idea, but feel a little underwhelming to me in terms of progression. It feels like I want a bigger difference from what I'm hearing before the transition to what I'm hearing after the transition. Not sure if I want more of a dynamic difference or compositional difference, but that's what my ear tells me.

Good sounds, well thought out, but a little reserved.

Keep it up :)

Gustav Johnson

3 hours ago, Gustav Johnson said:

Nice! I hear some promise in here. The sounds you're using are nice and fairly well balanced. Your changes and "impact" moments are well spaced and have the right idea, but feel a little underwhelming to me in terms of progression. It feels like I want a bigger difference from what I'm hearing before the transition to what I'm hearing after the transition. Not sure if I want more of a dynamic difference or compositional difference, but that's what my ear tells me.

Good sounds, well thought out, but a little reserved.

Keep it up :)

Gustav Johnson

 

Thank you Gustav Johnson!

8 minutes ago, ilv said:

It's way too short, but good opening motive!

 

Thank you ilv!