Girl in the Café

Greetings! This is my newest composition, and for the first time, I composed for a full string orchestra. The track and score are attached to the topic.

I actually like it, but I think you really need to study counterpoint.
This helped me too with solving illogical melodies and harmonies and voice leading.

Maybe you should take a look at Fux' Gradus ad Parnassum.

3 hours ago, Maarten Bauer said:

I actually like it, but I think you really need to study counterpoint.

Yes, I need that and I'll start studying soon.

2 hours ago, ilv said:

Also, the bass line is hard to hear.

Actually, I just turned down the volume of that line, because It was too loud when I listened to the piece for first time.

2 hours ago, ilv said:

The ending was a bit too abrupt and the piece felt incomplete.

I know, and lots of my works have the same problem. Do you have any suggestions for that?