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Theme for piano 8


Donethur

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The themes that you used were nice. Yet I think your title should be "2 themes for piano - 8). The transition from 4/4 time to 3/4 time was quite abrupt. Also, the first theme didn't seem to go anywhere. That's fine for background music (for a video game or movie soundtrack) but adding a climax at some spot (even a small climax since you're going onto the second more grander theme anyways) would be even better (for a solo piece). The "waltz" seemed fun with a hint of a mysterious touch (not sure if you intended it to be like that). Hope you develop these themes into something grander eventually cause they do have potential.

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Hi thanks for the feedback. Actually I am not thinking in extending it. It was born more like a "etude" of a nocturne analyzing the left hand of Chopin's. I am not 100% satisfied with this one, but shared it anyway. I agree with you in all what you say.

I am working in another piece now, son i hope to share it soon.

:)

 

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