Theme for piano 8

Hi, I am sharing with you my latest work. Hope you like it :)

https://soundcloud.com/donethur/theme-for-piano-8

The themes that you used were nice. Yet I think your title should be "2 themes for piano - 8). The transition from 4/4 time to 3/4 time was quite abrupt. Also, the first theme didn't seem to go anywhere. That's fine for background music (for a video game or movie soundtrack) but adding a climax at some spot (even a small climax since you're going onto the second more grander theme anyways) would be even better (for a solo piece). The "waltz" seemed fun with a hint of a mysterious touch (not sure if you intended it to be like that). Hope you develop these themes into something grander eventually cause they do have potential.

Hi thanks for the feedback. Actually I am not thinking in extending it. It was born more like a "etude" of a nocturne analyzing the left hand of Chopin's. I am not 100% satisfied with this one, but shared it anyway. I agree with you in all what you say.

I am working in another piece now, son i hope to share it soon.

:)

Actually, I decided to totally dismissed this theme. I think the constant audition was problematic and now I see problems I didnt see the day I composed it.

The one I am working now I think worth more the time investment.