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Hello,

I am sharing this composition I did to represent this famous story. I think I will keep working over this, but so far, I like the results. First the rats are represented, disordering the town. Then, the main character appears to put order.

Hope you enjoy it.

Rgds,

 

 

Edited by Donethur
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Very nice! The chaos the rats produce is really dreadful, and it is a sharp break and relief when the simple melody of the piper arrives. But its dark overtones already foreshadow the scary second part of the tale. Well done!

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14 hours ago, Willibald said:

Very nice! The chaos the rats produce is really dreadful, and it is a sharp break and relief when the simple melody of the piper arrives. But its dark overtones already foreshadow the scary second part of the tale. Well done!

 

Thanks mate :)... yes, I picked the dark end of the story... that is the direction (you read exactly my intentions!). :)

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Progressions are clean, the soundscape is nice and balanced. Not my type of track but well orchestrated.

2 Notes.

1:24 The way this switch-up enters is rhythmically a bit chaotic but a second later you catch it.

The final outro doesn't sit well with me. I feel it deviates too much from where you were taking me. Might be taste, don't know.

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