luderart Posted November 5, 2017 Posted November 5, 2017 This is my soliloquy for violin No. 30. Here is the link to my Soliloquy for Violin No. 29: https://www.youngcomposers.com/t34240/soliloquy-for-violin-no-29/ MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Soliloquy for Violin No. 30 > next PDF Soliloquy for Violin No. 30 1 Quote
aMusicComposer Posted November 8, 2017 Posted November 8, 2017 Good job The first beat of bar 20 sounds slightly awkward. Maybe start it from the G so it is smoother. The fourth in bar 31 does not sound great. Maybe make this a C+A double stop. Apart from these minor points, it's a great piece. Well done! Quote
luderart Posted November 8, 2017 Author Posted November 8, 2017 4 hours ago, aMusicComposer said: Good job The first beat of bar 20 sounds slightly awkward. Maybe start it from the G so it is smoother. The fourth in bar 31 does not sound great. Maybe make this a C+A double stop. Apart from these minor points, it's a great piece. Well done! Thanks for your review, your appreciation of the piece, and your suggestions! Quote
aMusicComposer Posted November 9, 2017 Posted November 9, 2017 I'll tell you what, this piece is so catchy! It's still going round my head just now! Well done again! 1 Quote
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