Piece for piano B (work in progress)

Hi all, I wanted to share my latest work with you. It is in progress, but I want to rest a bit after continuing it, also I need to think about how to extend it and connect it with other parts I have alkready composed, based on the same melodic motiv. Feedback is always welcome. Thanks!

Rgds,

Is this related to the cheerful piece you posted some weeks ago? It sounds like the minor cousin and would fit very good to it. Overall very nice! However, the transition around 0:45 (and its repeat around 0:55) was a bit awkward. People with better ears can point to what is going on harmonically, I can just describe that something is off at these two points. 

Hi Willibald,

Thanks for commenting. The notes are the ones from the Neapolitan 6th but inverted, maybe that's the issue. I am going to work over the theme a bit (it is work in progress), I will check. And yes, you are right, Piece A, B and C will be connected. :)

rgds