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This is my "Conversation for String Quartet No. 2".

Here is the link to my "Conversation for String Quartet No. 1":

https://www.youngcomposers.com/t33779/conversation-for-string-quartet-no-1/

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Please develop the piece more since it seems to lead to nowhere. 

 

Also, the sixteenth notes followed by a sixteenth rests in many of the bars could be substituted by a staccato eighth note. I don't think it's necessary to complicate things

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The title of the piece is well chosen. It really sounds chattering strings, stopped by an authoritative bass. Funny and inventive!

But, as @Maximus said, it sounds just liked the nucleus of something longer, not like a finished,  self-contained piece. And for my taste, there are many cadences for such a short piece.

Just my two cents. 

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It's very nice!...

Your music is very rich when you write for a string quartet or any other camera set of instruments. Different from your soliloquies, that are also inspiring.

I've said it some times, already.... I don't think the shortness of a piece implies it's incomplete. In fact, I prefer listening to the ideas and that's all. But I respect other opinions, of course.

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Thanks LostSamurai, Maximus, Willibald, and Luis Hernandez for your reviews. I especially thank LostSamurai and Luis for your positive feedback. I also thank Willibald and Maximus for the potentially constructive criticisms that you have provided me.

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