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Your harmonic language is very striking and interesting. Some score things to fix like rests and proper beat divisions, etc. but that's fine.
The polyphonic language at the end was the only thing I didn't latch onto quite as much. I wasn't entirely sure the direction it was going... the harmony got a little bit lost and it seemed like the introduction to a new section as opposed to the ending section.
Basically, you have the material to stretch this one out a bit more. 

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