Larissa

Hello,

Yesterday I finished a new composition. Since I'd listened to it so many times, I couldn't decide whether it sounds OK. I'd like to hear your comments and feedbacks. Thanks for taking your time in advance.

Best regards,

Selcuk

Larissa.mp3

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wg0We749BVM&feature=youtu.be

Some weird chord choices throughout. I can't tell if this was totally intentional, especially with the multitude of dominant and tonic/dominant chord cross relationships.
A lot of extensions and 7ths in the piece muddied some of the harmonic motion a little bit, though I can see the value of having something not sound so simple because of them. 
 

On 01.01.2018 at 7:19 AM, Monarcheon said:

Some weird chord choices throughout. I can't tell if this was totally intentional, especially with the multitude of dominant and tonic/dominant chord cross relationships.
A lot of extensions and 7ths in the piece muddied some of the harmonic motion a little bit, though I can see the value of having something not sound so simple because of them. 
 

 

Hi @Monarcheon

Thanks for your detailed feedback. Your comments help me a lot. 

Best regards

1 hour ago, ilv said:

I think the dissonances are quite intentional. It's a lovely piece.

 

Hi @ilv,

Thanks for your comment. Chord choices might lead to some dissonances. Whether good or bad but all of them was intentional.