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I wrote this tune starting on Christmas day and just put nonstop work into it. Tell me what you think, please give me a like, share it and follow me on Instagram @wind_player1 you can see my recording setup. DM here or there I would love to hear more of all your stuff and work together. Thanks!

 

Cj Rhen

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I don't know much about Electronic but I can't help but get a subtle feeling that there are parts in here that doesn't fit altogether as a cohesive piece. Introducing new themes and adding some variation on those are fine, but I think in here they happen too abruptly and there's no real easy transition into the rhythmn changes to introduce those changes better. 

It sounds marvelous don't get me wrong but I was caught off guard too many times with the sudden transitions. I think if you can work on mending your transitions more closely, everything will sound a lot better.

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