piano solo Farewell (Piano Composition)

I just found this forum and feel that this community is quite friendly for sharing work.

I would like to share my work and looking forward for some feedback.

The Piano composition is titled: "Farewell", I am about to leave a City where I lived for15 years, and trying to elaborate the feelings through this piece.   

- Sorry for the recording quality (just using my phone)

- There is a little bit off somewhere during the performing, but still hoping the audience can get the idea.

It's lovely.

Your harmonies are great and I really think you have expressed these leaving-home emotions.

Very nice and evocative. And you know what? That sound makes it special.

Very beautiful. Great composition. 

On 2018/2/8 at 3:31 AM, ilv said:

Agree with the above. Nice concert piece. Calm and dreamy. Very touching, as if saying "farewell". I don't think F belongs at 1:26, though not really a big issue. I think D-natural doesn't fit at 3:22. I don't think A-flat fits at 3:48. G would work better. Otherwise, great job.

 

Hey, thanks for the details. I think I gonna to revise that with your comment. I really enjoy discussion on this forum.