Those Who Dare to Dream

I pulled a picture from google and wrote a piano piece I thought fitted the feel of the picture. Feel free to leave your thoughts and feedback.

EDIT: The picture wouldn't upload for some reason so I'll leave a link to it here: 

https://wallpaperscraft.com/download/tamagosho_sky_stars_telescope_night_window_102167/1920x1080

RE-EDIT: I've added a second version with an added end section.

Overall, nice!

I like the restful mood, which obviously needs to represent dreaming.
The variations on the theme / harmony are nice.
I do, however, think that the ending is too abrupt. A coda or final section would improve the piece.

The audio is pretty confusing, because the left hand sounds more like a guitar, but this issue is of course fixed when it is performed on a real piano.

14 hours ago, Maarten Bauer said:

Overall, nice!

I like the restful mood, which obviously needs to represent dreaming.
The variations on the theme / harmony are nice.
I do, however, think that the ending is too abrupt. A coda or final section would improve the piece.

The audio is pretty confusing, because the left hand sounds more like a guitar, but this issue is of course fixed when it is performed on a real piano.

 

Thanks Maarten!

I did agree the end seemed a little incomplete, I've now added an end section. It still needs some tweaking to get it right but I think it's better than before.

Yeah it's a pretty crude piano vst I'm using unfortunately, hopefully I'll be able to find someone to perform it eventually though.