waltz I’m 13 check out my waltz

I’m thirteen and an aspie check out my waltz couldn’t upload sound via my medium so I had to upload just sheet music.

It'a a pity there is no sound. Anyway one can "hear" in the score. I would say that both the melody and the left hand never change, and their rhythms are equal.  I would try to expand the melody a bit.

There are lots of parallel movement and little rhythmic change and incomplete chords.  Also some measures seem unplayable (Like measures 25 and 26) but these are common initial tendencies as a novice composer (I went through this myself) so definitely keep composing!

It is very repetitive, with lots of thr same rhythms. It almost sounds like an accompaniment to something. Maybe writing a melody of over the top of it would help.