I don't know if it's better or worse

I made my quintet piece a bit longer, yet I don't know what to think about it.

Making a piece longer doesn't always make it better.

The man in charge of the chamber group sent me their latest performance,

without a single word attached to it. I assume that by doing that he asked me to make something closer to that.

I really don't know what to do or what to think about the piece.

Here's the link for their performed piece, please watch and see if you think that the level, style, and length of my piece fit to this group.

Maybe it's a bit too much to ask for, but I set and listened to pieces that are much longer than that on this forum,

I guess some of you would be kind enough to give me from their time.

Audio might not be exactly the same as the notes.

If you have the time for that, please look over the notes.

Any feedback would be appreciated.

Not easy to make a comparison because one is a live performance. And the piano version doesn't give an idea of the result.

About the live performance, I think they play beautifully. Perhaps some occasional inaccuracy? But they play in synchrony.

I also think the length is ok, it the extended version is just to exactly repeat some part, I prefer the live version. I enjoyed this performance, and perhaps it's because I'm not very fond of classical style, and many repetitions make me tired.

17 hours ago, Luis Hernández said:

Not easy to make a comparison because one is a live performance. And the piano version doesn't give an idea of the result.

About the live performance, I think they play beautifully. Perhaps some occasional inaccuracy? But they play in synchrony.

I also think the length is ok, it the extended version is just to exactly repeat some part, I prefer the live version. I enjoyed this performance, and perhaps it's because I'm not very fond of classical style, and many repetitions make me tired.

 

I'm afraid that you got me wrong.

They're not performing my piece in the video, the video is the last thing they performed,

just to give a general idea of what they usually do and what they're capable of.

Actually I might be the one that got what you said wrong,

remember that English doesn't come natural to me.

If that's the case, then I'll ask an English speaker friend of mine to translate what you wrote and then will comment accordingly.