Work in progress

this seems like a genuine community and I'm honored to be able to share my pieces here. Some feedback would be wonderful.

The overall atmosphere sounds good,

but I can't usefully review your work without a music sheet.

If you don't have any... what do you want me to review?

I need some context. What were your goals when you composed this piece?

What do you look for now? Do you want to continue writing it? fix what you already have?

If you want a deeper feedback let me know by writing @Rabbival507, so I'll get a notification.