Sunrise - Upbeat Piano

Just finished my new piano tune - tried to go for a more upbeat style this time. Would love to hear any thoughts/improvements. 

Thanks :)

Someone ate tons of Japanese media for breakfast XD

I enjoyed it, cheered me up quite a bit.

I think you should... change the dynamics a bit, or change the piano samples.

I'm not sure what but something bothered me about that... it sounded a bit too... mechanic? I'm not sure.

It's a bit weird because that's what my teacher usually says about my pieces...

If I'll find out what exactly is the thing that bothers me I'll let you know.

The name and picture are beautiful but, in my opinion, have nothing to do with the piece.

Can I borrow this picture from you? It gives me an idea for a piece (not piano solo though).

Thanks for the feedback Rabbival! :) Hahahaha, yes a lot of my music is influenced by Japanese musical tropes etc xD 

Yes! I know what you mean! I always feel my piano pieces are lacking in parts as the piano itself just doesn't sound right, but unfortunately I don't have the skill to tinker with the parameters to the extent that it sounds more natural, but hopefully after more and more practice it'll sound better :) 

Haha, I'm glad you like the artwork, of course you can use it!! The link is in the description of my video so feel free to download it and use it. Would love to hear what you come up with! I know, often I come up with names that don't really have much of a relation to the piece.. but at the time I find some weird connection, and then later I realise that it doesn't really make sense. Will try be more consistent with my naming/artwork next time :) 

Thanks again for the feedback, it's much appreciated. 

9 minutes ago, AdLib said:

Thanks for the feedback Rabbival! :) Hahahaha, yes a lot of my music is influenced by Japanese musical tropes etc xD 

Yes! I know what you mean! I always feel my piano pieces are lacking in parts as the piano itself just doesn't sound right, but unfortunately I don't have the skill to tinker with the parameters to the extent that it sounds more natural, but hopefully after more and more practice it'll sound better :) 

Haha, I'm glad you like the artwork, of course you can use it!! The link is in the description of my video so feel free to download it and use it. Would love to hear what you come up with! I know, often I come up with names that don't really have much of a relation to the piece.. but at the time I find some weird connection, and then later I realise that it doesn't really make sense. Will try be more consistent with my naming/artwork next time :) 

Thanks again for the feedback, it's much appreciated. 

 

Do you want to give me the midi and I'll do what I can?