"Validus" by Cj Rhen

I wrote a new song in the past 2 days. It is a samba type fusion music. I incorporated my JP-8080 to death and my live horns. Tell me what you think, comment and follow me here or SoundCloud or Instagram @wind_player1 https://www.instagram.com/wind_player1/

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:13's chord was awkward. Since it was both diatonic and modulatory at the same time.
The rising tone at :55 was a bit strange since it wasn't actually leading to anything. Cool trumpet solo in the section though.
1:55 was a bit awkward too, since the bass note didn't complement the top tones.
Parallel 5ths around 4:00 sounded weird. The E natural in the section before was awkward too since it didn't sound like the major 6th of G minor.
Nice work.