Op108 Nr2

Hello everyone, I am back, this is an original Chinese folk music composed by me, hope you like it, and welcome everyone's commentation.

Thoroughly enjoyed it!

In the audio the flute was a little loud compared to the other sounds. Your rhythms work very nicely together - they are very complex, but it still sounds clear and organized.

Nice work stating and developing your thematic materials.

Keep it up!

Gustav Johnson

Your soundfont makes every note of the shakuhachi-type instrument to be embellished it's a little strange, and I know the performer is supposed to know how to interpret a melody like that, but it can't hurt to write it out, especially in western notation.
27 isn't very idiomatic to rhythmic dissonance treatment of the style. I would also say that the koto-type instrument's runs near the end are, even if they are idiomatically next to each other, is a little weird to go both directions. 
It's a nice piece! Good job.

I like it a lot. It's very nice to listen to. I think there could be a bit more development of the themes, and maybe some more complex harmony. I like the effects that the different instruments have, but some seem to be slightly underused.