when ive fallen

I wrote this for a 48 hour composition contest in Seattle. It did relatively well! The performers misinterpreted some of the markings but they had such a short time to learn it, I understand why that could have happened. 

I LOVE it..  The freedom to explore the 'edges of music boundaries'..  It seems so abstract, yes has sense of coherency to it..  I think also I am intrigued by the emotional quality of it.  I'm finding the 'emotional intent' of an instrument, or a motif it plays, directs the mind to a certain degree of a particular emotion.. 

I like this kind of music, this piece has mystery & exploration. I didnt understand the end, it sounds painfull somehow but it means something, i hope good :) Nice Work!!!

Thank you both!