piano Sunsets

Hi  Young Composers ! This one was from my first piano "compositions" years ago. Its a few seconds sample. The final edition track is very diferent & includes this piano piece . Perhaps almost ready to complete the whole album & these days i have drunk many coffees🤪, many nights to make the last editions on every track. Τhe small tries that ALL OF US maκe  gives us so much happines, and this make sense! You already know that anyway 😉

Thank you for your time!

Ampnoe's

I think the piece is nice but the melody stays always in a percussive high register; some contrast would be good, I think. it all depends on your intentions.

2nd inversion chord at :36 was a bit strange.
Your piano soundfont follows the electric one which makes things sound like unresolved suspensions or retardations. 
It ends on a v chord which is a bit strange, especially since it doesn't have the effect of a turnaround loop.
It also doesn't really need to be this short I think. Especially with the electronic element, you could have a section with just a chill drum groove in the back of similar musical material and use this time to modulate and go to lots of fancy places. It's just a very safe piece right now.

Thank you @Luis Hernández and @Monarcheon i will see carefully your advices & i will do the best i can 🙂 Thanks a lot! 🍻🍻

That's the final version guys! i hope to enjoy this  piece ! i will make remixes time by time! thank you all!