Osbuurn Posted May 1, 2018 Posted May 1, 2018 Hey, everyone ! It's been a few years since I've last posted on this forum.. I haven't been as productive with composing as I should've been these past few years.. needless to say, I'm still pretty new. 😛 Here's a piece I finished back in 2014 and posted here a long time ago.. So, since I'm getting back into composing (and that this is arguably my best work out of the very few I have) I wanted some fresh feedback on it.. I wanna improve as a composer.. so please, don't hold back with the critiques. 🙂 Cheers! Nic https://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/8196350de48ded3feb3b24a05e70cc59e7124e39 2 Quote
Luis Hernández Posted May 1, 2018 Posted May 1, 2018 It is nice to listen to it, it has beautiful melodies. I wonderful why you wrote all the left hand in eighths... with the pedal they could have been written in fourths . I would think of adding some middle section changing the texture or the rhythm. Quote
Muhammadreza Posted May 2, 2018 Posted May 2, 2018 I listened to the piece and it's awesome. I'm a huge fan waltz and nocturne (specially in Chopin's style) and your piece was one of the closest ones to chopin's pieces! Quote
Osbuurn Posted May 6, 2018 Author Posted May 6, 2018 Thank you, guys .. I appreciate the feedback 🙂 Quote
arpeggia Posted June 4, 2018 Posted June 4, 2018 I'm also a huge fan of waltz, and this is quite relaxing 😊 Good job! 👍 Quote
Eddy67716 Posted June 6, 2018 Posted June 6, 2018 I liked it all but the ending. The root E tonic triad in bar 60 show be just a fifth. Quote
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