The Creepy Collective

A short ditty inspired by Penderecki I wrote a few months ago. Recorded myself playing this on violin and bass, and edited the sound to emulate other instruments. I know it is not very well executed, but garageband is hard to work with sometimes. I don't have a score this time, sorry! Love it or hate it, please leave a comment on how I can improve. Thanks!

thecreepycollective (online-audio-converter.com).mp3  

I can't listen to it.

It's not the piece, it's my problem with repetitive music.

After about twenty "tang"(the piano) I had to turn it off.

I think it's iteresting but it's true that the constant "pizzicato" note is too evident in the beginning. After that it is surpased by other sounds. The textures grow in complexity, and not easy to write that.  The problem I see is that this kind of music is very rude alone. Surely if it comes with a movie or whatever, it is fine.

interesting! fun!

Seriously, that could be used in a short film horror film!

@Youngc thanks I honestly was not expecting anyone to enjoy it.

3 minutes ago, notice_me_maestro said:

@Youngc thanks I honestly was not expecting anyone to enjoy it.

 

No problemo!

@Luis Hernández @Rabbival507 Music doesn't need to sound pleasing in my onion. It should express the same range of emotions that people experience, and I was feeling anguished at the time that I wrote this. It sounds repetitive and dissonant because I wanted to create unpleasant emotions. So if you don't like it, I guess I could say I have succeeded then. I highly recommend that you listen to Penderecki's music, I find it quite intriguing. 

@notice_me_maestro I didn't say I don't like it, in fact I do.

What style were you trying to emulate? 

This really sounds like something from a horror film. I was feeling scared and uncomfortable while listening to it.