Looking Strange to Myself

Dark wave, is one of my favorite genres in "modern" music. But, it was a long time I haven't listened to that type of music. In previous days, I was looking for music which can help me focus when I'm studying for exams, and I checked my spotify for "Sopor AEternus & The Ensemble of Shadows". I listened to their album "Dead Lovers Sarabande Vol. 2" and then, I decided to make a track similar to those tracks after my exams. In last 2 days I had 3 exams and it made me tired, but I could make this track, inspired by Sopor AEternus!

Use of C7 in the opening progression takes away from the seriousness of the piece, especially arpeggiation.
Counterpoint in the next section does not match really well. Lots of suspended non-harmonic tones against each other and the bass chords.
Use of parallel thirds in the bass sounds a little amateurish, especially since it's so range-heavy with the chords on top.
Your violin sound jumping up a seventh to exercise the repeat is a bit jumpy.