orchestral Collapse

Thank you for listening! :)

Sounds great!

It doesn't sound like a collapsing thing to me though.

Oh no it's changing.

The piano and cello parts are just great. 

After and before that... the percussion is far too loud, and it just feels... unconnected to me.

I think that you should take these two and make two individual pieces out of them.

Or make the piece longer to make the transition softer.

Well, yes, this is your arrangement and I guess it has a connection with something specific. t's beautiful, and I think piano and chello only would work too. Perhaps the voice of the woman too...

Thanks!

You have exact point that i have same as well...

probably you're right. it's weird sometimes, sometimes it's good.

I need better idea haha

On 7/28/2018 at 4:31 PM, Rabbival507 said:

Sounds great!

It doesn't sound like a collapsing thing to me though.

Oh no it's changing.

The piano and cello parts are just great. 

After and before that... the percussion is far too loud, and it just feels... unconnected to me.

I think that you should take these two and make two individual pieces out of them.

Or make the piece longer to make the transition softer.

 

 

Thank you!

I think I should more mixing it between voices and other instruments haha

On 7/28/2018 at 7:26 PM, Luis Hernández said:

Well, yes, this is your arrangement and I guess it has a connection with something specific. t's beautiful, and I think piano and chello only would work too. Perhaps the voice of the woman too...