The Last One

"Stat Sua cuique dies

Maél is mé tó féran"

To each his day is given,

now it's my time to fare from you.

Well not really,

I have a week before I go.

When I came to this forum about half a year ago,

I told you I'll have to join the country's army in half a year.

I want to finish this last piece before I have to go.

I have a few other projects to do, but I'll do them after these three years.

Maybe I'll even have some time to work on a few on weekends.

I'll try to give feedbacks for a few pieces on my free weekends.

Now for the piece-

Big thanks to @Luis Hernández who was my biggest help during the process.

But it's not done yet, I still have a week to fix it.

The audio is terrible (especially at the ending part), but I guess it's better than nothing.

Please, I really need your help.

Give a listen to my piece and tell me how to make it better,

I want to have a good use of the time I have.

Also, what would you do if you knew you have a week before your freedom is taken from you?

Wow, what a great piece! I find it coherent, modern, beautiful "v¡everything" (harmony, melody, rhythms). Also very nice extended techniques here and there, very effective. The sound is not so bad... I think the balance between the three instruments is very good, the three take the leading voice alternatively all the time. The minutes went very quickly I didn't realize it was coming to an end. Congratulations!

About what is to come in your life... I don't know what your feelings are (not my concern, sorry). So I hope the best.

I believe you have the music inside yourself. So you'll make it go out in the future. This piece is the proof.

I hope you can stay in touch ...

6 minutes ago, Luis Hernández said:

Wow, what a great piece! I find it coherent, modern, beautiful "v¡everything" (harmony, melody, rhythms). Also very nice extended techniques here and there, very effective. The sound is not so bad... I think the balance between the three instruments are very good, the three take the leading voice alternatively all the time. The minutes went very quickly I didn't realize it was coming to an end. Congratulations!

About what is to come in your life... I don't know what your feelings are (not my concern, sorry). So I hope the best.

I believe you have the music inside yourself. So you'll make it go out in the future. This piece is the proof.

I hope you can stay in touch ...

 

Thanks!

You helped me a lot!

I really hope I'll get to go home every weekend,

but I'm probably going to be a plane fixer so it's every second weekend....

I'm glad that you like it! I've been giving it most of my free time for the past month,

writing, deleting, writing again, listening, learning etc.

About how I feel... I'm more than afraid.

But don't worry, I have ways to keep myself cheered up and hopeful,

and you really helped with this kind feedback!

I'll try to keep in touch, it's not up to me though.

*note: if anybody else reads this feedback and have a critical review-

please tell me the problems you see.

Fully encouraging reviews are great to cheer up the composer,

but critical reviews are not less important! 

you've taken me on a breath taking journey. I slowed my breathing throughout your song. I mean you've surpassed anything I have done yet so I can't say anything. Lovely piece. I have nothing else to say.

The piece is wonderful. The fourth movement is utterly amazing. Your creativity is breathtaking. Please keep composing.

Regarding your national armed service: stay safe, and mazel tov.