Black Rose

Hello,

Could you please check my piano piece and tell what you think? Thanks for listening 🙂

Strange treatment harmonic rhythm. Sometimes it holds on too long, other times it's just right. The iv and III chords are the most prominent examples of this.
It doesn't sound you took the melody in relation to the harmony at a lot of points. At 1:40 you have a VI chord in the melody over a V voicing. There are a lot of places like this and it throws off the harmonic schema. 

@Monarcheon

Thanks for reviewing my song. I think you are right about the continuity of the harmony and I should work on it.