Three metal pieces, incomplete.

Hey guys! I'm really suffering from writer's block and I want to know your opinion about these pieces I wrote as a "practice" to write a serious metal song ...

I tried Ambient Black Metal, Atmospheric Black Metal (Blackgaze, actually!) and Funeral Doom. And, I want to know which one I made better and I should continue.

Upload center of YC gave me some errors, so I uploaded them in an Iranian site. I hope you can download theme (facepalm)

Ambient black metal : http://s8.picofile.com/file/8333929826/ambientBlackMetal.mp3.html

Blackgaze : http://s8.picofile.com/file/8333929934/Blackgaze_Sketch.mp3.html

Funeral Doom : http://s8.picofile.com/file/8333929992/FuneralDoomSongTestPointless.mp3.html

Hi. I'm afraid I can't download the music files !

7 minutes ago, Luis Hernández said:

Hi. I'm afraid I can't download the music files !

 

Sorry, I forgot website is in Persian. First click on this button :

then, it transforms to a valid download link. By clicking on this button you can download :

I have no idea about the difference in those (sub)styles.

But the first one is nice beacuse of the ethereal atmosphere in the first part.

The second one has a very "crazy" rhytmic patterns... Well, I know at this point you're very good with rhythms...

i dn't know what to tell you about which direction you should take. Why to make a restriction? Work on the style you like most, but don't discard the others.

3 minutes ago, Luis Hernández said:

The second one has a very "crazy" rhytmic patterns... Well, I know at this point you're very good with rhythms...

Thanks! I got the idea from "progressive" metal music for drums. Drums play 5/16 and 7/16 and 7/8 but guitar is simple 4/4. I love to play with rhythms like this.

3 minutes ago, Luis Hernández said:

But the first one is nice beacuse of the ethereal atmosphere in the first part.

You know, this is why I love this genre. I really wanted to copy bands like Vinterrikket but I couldn't.

5 minutes ago, Luis Hernández said:

Why to make a restriction?

Before I start serious music production, I restricted myself to drone, ambient and noise music. Later, I tried to make EDM music and other types of electronic music. But now, I just got blocked by myself and I can't make my ideas on paper or DAW.