A short study

Here is a short study for piano, I wrote.

Roberto Zini - Studio brillante

I hope it is something interesting.

Don't you think that it's a little mechanical? These MIDI things do require a whole lot of finnesse to sound good.

I'm not skilled in treatening the sound of a midi composition. One thing is sure. The same piece rendered with a $250 piano sound, would be much less mechanical. Furthermore if it was performed by a skilled pianist it would be even much better. None of these options are impossible to realize in the future. But what is worth now for me, is the musical idea.

Thanks for the feedback.

I don't mean to be cruel, it's just that the MIDI performance was so bad to my ears that I could not even comment on the lines you wrote. I'm very sorry.

It sounds better than the sound options I have available for piano, at any rate.  Mine are so bad, I tend to replace piano with harp or guitar for the sound file.  You could take a little time to massage the tempo or add some accents, though, and it would add a lot to the impression of the playback.  Did you have a pdf of the score for this that we can look at?  It's easier to give specific feedback when we can cite measure numbers and see how everything relates to everything else.