Looking for feedback on composed pieces

Hi everyone,

I recently started making music, mainly of the lofi hip-hop genre, since I enjoy listening to it a lot. Could some of you please listen and review my works? Any help is greatly appreciated,

https://soundcloud.com/cor-bey

Thanks!

It's not bad. I kind of like it.

Hi Corglathan:

I liked Beats me more.  My comment for 317, is I would like to hear more variety in it. Writing Music is something, you spend a lifetime learning more about.  Each piece you compose is an exploration. I try to listen all different types of music, I search out music that is similar to the genre I am currently working in. They give me ideas.

Keep going, and congratulations.

22 hours ago, Ken320 said:

It's not bad. I kind of like it.

 

13 hours ago, markstyles said:

Hi Corglathan:

I liked Beats me more.  My comment for 317, is I would like to hear more variety in it. Writing Music is something, you spend a lifetime learning more about.  Each piece you compose is an exploration. I try to listen all different types of music, I search out music that is similar to the genre I am currently working in. They give me ideas.

 Keep going, and congratulations.

  

 

Thanks for the encouragement! I'll put all the feedback into consideration when working on my next composition. 🙂