Chrysalis

Hello,

Please check out my latest composition. Hope you like it.

A Good piece! A Score would be helpful, do you have one?

@Gustav Johnson Thanks for your comment. I generated the score from midi using Musescore. It seems quite messy but I don't know how to fix it. I attached the generated sheet.

Thanks for the score, it helps me listen better. I definitely like your melodic content, especially the bits like measure 18-24 ish. Compositionally I think it's good, the melody is clear and the accompaniment is appropriate, although you might want to consider going through and finding places that could be reduced for clarity. The melody is pretty busy the entire time (lots of movement and embellishing tones), so craft the accompaniment to compliment that - be intentional about the "big/important" moments you want to guide the listener to.

A nice piece!

Gustav

@Gustav Johnson

Hi Gustav,

Thanks for your analysis. Your feedback is quite useful for me. I think I'll revise it or compose a new one using your suggestions. I also liked phrases at measure 18-24. I think I'm gonna use those measures in another composition. Thanks for your listening and commenting again 🙂

Beautiful.

A more idiomatic writing (not almost all the time black notes in the left hand) and some work on dynamics would make it a very nice piece.

Hi @Luis Hernández

I'm so glad that you liked it 🙂 Thanks for your useful feedback. Dynamics is what I usually ignore 🙂