American March

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Here's a piece I did on MuseScore, a march for piano. Curious to know what you guys think, how it might be improved.

I am just starting to learn how to sight-read, after years of just messing around on the piano and improvising without reading.

It's nice, but there several issues can be said. Some chords and parts are impossible to play... The left hand could bring contrasts, not being the same all the time.

Ah, I get what you mean. Perhaps it would only work for 2 pianos. Thanks for the feedback!

I found this very cute and clever. The odd melodies, at once Chopin then Barnum and Bailey and back again gave me more than one grin. And the sheer force of will behind those pounding chords made it somehow not banal, but humorous. Which is very difficult to pull off. But you did it without losing the essential substance of the music. Bravo!

Thank you very much!