Violin Concerto Attempt

Hello Everyone,

After some years of struggle, I finally have the confidence to compose a concerto for my instrument, Violin. As opposed to my previous Piano Concerto, this time I included the Brass and Woodwind sections to make it more orchestral.

It starts with slow themes and with around 3-4 minutes of development, it enters the faster section.  If this movement would be at least 10-12 minutes long, do you think it builds up quick enough to draw the attention of the audience? I planned to make it the first movement, but I doubt if it is a good choice since most of the Violin Concertos start with a fast movement (e.g. Allegro Moderato). 

Moreover, do you think my orchestration is satisfactory? Is the theme attractive?

It would be great if you can leave some comments as I really want to know if I am on the right track. Thank you:)

Best,

HoYin

The piece is great I love it. But, the form and the structure of the piece is unbalanced. I think if you could try to set the music on a more direct form, an even structure of the theme and parts in between, it would sound a little bit more organized. Other than that, it was great