edfgi234 Posted February 15, 2019 Posted February 15, 2019 I have had quite a lot of time over the past couple of days and tried to finish this piece. I'm not sure if this piece should be called a fantasy or part 2 to be honest. Feedback is appreciated. Thanks. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu Fantasies no. 1 - Part 2 > next PDF Fantasies no. 1 - Part 2 - Full Score Quote
Rabbival507 Posted February 15, 2019 Posted February 15, 2019 @edfgi234 You have many good ideas of rhythms and your harmony is interesting. However, piece is a bit too long for my opinion and there were some parts where it felt quite empty: It's a bit of a dramatic fall after our ear got used to more rhythmic patterns, more complex harmony and more voices. It feels to empty, at least for me. If you want this nothingness I guess it's fine but I think you should drop these elements one by one. I'd simply give the right hand chords too, so it sounds... fuller in a way. Also I like the way it ends. 1 Quote
Monarcheon Posted March 23, 2019 Posted March 23, 2019 Felt a little bit too long without significant change– when you get to the end, it sounds like a sort of end to the exposition of a sonata form or something. Like, it felt like that should have gone somewhere. I don't know, the intrigue you built a the beginning was great, but a little disappointing when it felt like that was going to be the status quo. 1 Quote
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