Creation

It's nice. I always think this kind of music is related to something (visual).

Sounds a bit like something you'd put over an inspiration speech. I really love the intensity in the second half aswell. However entering and leaving the more intense section with the drums felt a bit abrupt to me. I think if you worked up the dynamic a bit before entering this section, like adding a few more instruments and increasing dynamics gradually until the  drum section begins could make it feel a bit more fluid, and owuld also build tension for the climax to release. for the outro of the drum part, perhaps you could have a reverse cymbal leading up to the edge of it and then cutting back to the quiet soft piano so it feels like it reached its maximum energy right at the end. I enjoyed listening and well done on it 🙂