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  • 2 months later...
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It's well designed and has a catchy thematic element. Only thing I'd maybe say is the pacing was a little funky for me. I know these loops can't be super long, but when the chromatic walkup was introduced it felt like a cool little tail, then became the main thematic element until the end. Just went from 0-100 pretty quick near the end for me.

  • 2 weeks later...
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Agreed with Monarcheon about re-capping the theme. I think if you found some little riff to bridge the ideas from the chromatic build to the main idea that'd help. I'm not sure it even needs to be related directly to the main idea or the chromatic build, but something more like a "friend of a friend" who walks into the room and everyone's like "Heyyyy!!!" ... ish?

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Your sounds are great and the sections themselves are good, though!

Gustav

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