Bagatelle Num.1 in FMajor

Here is my first Classic Bagatelle for piano with an A-B-A' structure.

I appreciate your comments.

It sounds nice. It's like an echo of mozart with sustain pedal here and there....

Incredible piece, is really beautiful, but I think it really lacks of originality, I can only see Mozart, not your own voice, maybe sometimes something of you cames, other resemble to Beethoven. It's great, but I think you should put more of yourself, otherway, it's a nice work

Delicious! You surely know well the rhetorical elements typical of Classical style.

Bars 17-18 don't sound totally "right" to my ears: perhaps I'm missing a third repetition before the closing bar.

Some of the voice leading and pacing could be cleaned up a bit, hearing more classical-era music and a lot of score study will give you a natural feel for that kind of thing. It's a nice piece, there are just parts every now and then that don't sound exactly "right"

Thanks a lot for your comments! I agree with you, I love Mozart, Haydn and Beethoven and there is a more than obvius influence of them in there.

But I know I have still a lot to learn and probably finding my own style.