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I have been assigned to create(arrange) this piece, I am worried it is too dissonant and a bit too unfamiliar. I changed the instrument sounds because it is easy for me to work with any other sound than the default vocal samples. Any constructive feedback is welcome.

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It is certainly more dissonant, but not enough to disfigure it (at least to me; there are plenty of anthem purists who would disagree). I think the chromatic voice leading stuff is quite lovely, actually.

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No, I don't think the dissonances are too much. My own version of the National Anthem is pretty nasty in its own right. The "bombs bursting in air" sounds weird to me. Maybe look at that.

I LOVE what you did on "free".

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