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Effective, quite nice. Not sure how I feel about the sudden pedal stops, where all the resonating strings cut out, it's kind of jarring. When I listen to minimalism, I tend to go a little trance-y and the sudden stops my reverie is broken. That's a useful tool, but maybe not so frequently as to fully interrupt my journey, so to speak. Odd ending ... from a composition standpoint it makes sense, but it's a little abrupt sounding - might benefit from being extended or from a diminuendo, something to let us down softly.

Also I love the sound you've captured in the recording, super clean and mellow. Lovely!

Gustav

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Nice little thing here, that flows into itself rather well, despite being sectioned by standard form. The stops didn't get to me so much as Eb9 with a focus on the 9th did. I know it's part of your main progression but it always felt a little odd to me for some reason; perhaps it's the predominant function being accented as though it had dominant function, but I'm not sure. 

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