edfgi234 Posted September 11, 2019 Posted September 11, 2019 Fifth nocturne. Maybe too repetitive but not completely sure. Please do give feedback if you have any. Thanks very much. MP3 Play / pause JavaScript is required. 0:00 0:00 volume > next menu 24 Nocturnes - no. 5 in D Major > next PDF 24 Nocturnes - no. 5 in D Major - Full Score 1 Quote
SergeOfArniVillage Posted September 13, 2019 Posted September 13, 2019 I think your harmonic language here is lovely. You have great ideas! As for repetitiveness: you do include a repeat, but only for a 12-bar theme, so that’s not particularly egregious or anything. I would at least vary the theme from ms. 33 on, when you return to your original theme, if I were you. Whether you want to do this in a simple or complex way is up to you. There are potential benefits and downsides to either choice. I think this is a lovely little piece. Thanks for posting! ☺️ 1 Quote
.Em. Posted September 13, 2019 Posted September 13, 2019 I enjoyed this very much! I don't think it was too repetitive. The refrain sounds beautiful. I like how the end doesn't feel like the end but makes me go back to the beginning. I would love to learn to play this! Thank you for sharing! 1 Quote
edfgi234 Posted September 17, 2019 Author Posted September 17, 2019 Thanks for the feedback and comments on the piece @SergeOfArniVillage and @.Em.. I'll have a look at varying m 33 on. Probably will go for a simple variation. 1 Quote
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