Writing a song not sure if the choruses sound too empty? it's like chorus 1 connected to 2.

Writing a song not sure if the choruses sound too empty? it's like chorus 1 connected to 2. 

So I reworked the Choruses some, here we go 

To me it sounds like it could have some sort of bass in the first eight measures, also the end sounded confused a little but I'm amusing it'll lead to another part of the song. Good work.

@Hergusbergus Thank you, I thought of using trombones or something, but still learning how to write for some brass instruments. 

It sounds similar to a Two Steps from Hell opening. 

@Hergusbergus and @Esper Here's a pre-save link to the song set to release on Dec 16, 2019, titled "Dismal Route" https://distrokid.com/hyperfollow/silverwolf/dismal-route . 

@Esper Here's a spotify link if interested 

, song also released on YouTube, Deezer, and MediaNet. 

It sounds good. Intense trailer music. What VST did you use for the percussion sections? 

@Esper LoT ensemble, Dragon ensemble, Remo Rose Bowl 10ft drum from stormdrum 3. Earthquake ensemble, bowed cymbal, Godzilla Hits from stormdrum 2, Bass Drum Concert, from EW symphonic orchestra.