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  • 4 weeks later...
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Nice one Oscar. I have always liked the way you handle your tonal transitions. While I prefer a certain consistency, in keeping with classical ideas, I admire your work and see you are very talented. In a way your different approach to me can be as much educational as inspirational. Perhaps we can collaborate on something together.

Thanks again

  • 4 weeks later...
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It's amazing. I can't point feedback, it's obvious that you know more about music theory than me!

Perhaps I would love an introduction before that start. It doesn't sound for me as sonata would start:

Look Rachmaninoff's 1st and 2nd, the both start in other way. The sound like "SOMETHING IS COMING". I don't get the feeling of your sonata out of it: It sounds like how a prelude/étude/fantasia would start. At first, this is not bad, is something that breaks what is stablished, and it doesn't need to be wrong. On the other hand I find like you really could add an Introduction that facilities as an oberture the piece and the great structure of the work.

Keep doing this amazing!

 

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