Kings Symphony I

The first (attempted) Symphony, written by the young composer, Drake King. 

Hey! It's quite hard to give opinions on a piece without the sheet music. Could you post the sheets so that we could better analise it? 

One way or another, some parts sound very pleasant!

Best wishes, Jean.

Agreed. Some parts are good but generally the bass is too thick, let alone unbalanced with what's happening above. In the first movement just too thick. [Edit: try to lay out chords so the spacing between lower notes is wider, upper notes closer.] Performed live it will sound pretty muddy and dark. Likewise, try to introduce some dynamics into it. 

All the best with it.