My original violin prelude inspired by Bach Chaconne

Main thing to keep in mind is that your inner voices (yes, they still exist even if they're not a literal continuing voice) don't resolve properly in a Bach style. This mainly applies to your leading tone, like m. 19. Those down bows at the end are a little strange too. Do you want down up up? It's just awkward to play that that fast, as you can hear by the performer's struggles in that section.

Impressive stuff Oscar. And nice to hear your work again 🙂 I am no expert in violin technique and so cannot offer anything further to Monarcheon's input, however I will say that you adhere to Bach's style pretty well, and where there are deviations you offer something different so that we are not forced to make unavoidable comparisons. 

   Liked it a lot  especially the first, slow section 👍