Hello everyone, earlier in the year I composed a little nocturne. Indeed, you can recognize Chopin's style and that is obvisouly what I want. I want myself to master different styles before developing my own. So what are your thoughs about it ?

It has the spirit and flavor of a nocturne. It reminds me more of John Field.

I have listened to your Nocturne. I think your composition has many good qualities. The main of them is a beautiful and expressive melody. Structure is also logical and clear. As for me it is good.
However I think the transition from the medium episode to the reprise sounds some strange and unprepared. The accord  "Am" is seems not excellent.
Excuse me, please, if these my words sounded rude. I didn't want it.

And the last moment (if you will allow). Yes, you are right, the style of Chopin is recognizable here. If it was your goal you completely reached it. However I have never been able to understand for what to imitate strange styles before mastering the own one. I think you are very talented. Your own style (I guess) will be very bright and interesting.
I wish you to reach success and to write a lot of good compositions.

P.S. I'm sorry for my English.  

On 10/13/2019 at 7:44 PM, Luis Hernández said:

It has the spirit and flavor of a nocturne. It reminds me more of John Field.

 

That's a compliment for me 🙂

On 10/13/2019 at 7:52 PM, Alexx said:

I have listened to your Nocturne. I think your composition has many good qualities. The main of them is a beautiful and expressive melody. Structure is also logical and clear. As for me it is good.
However I think the transition from the medium episode to the reprise sounds some strange and unprepared. The accord  "Am" is seems not excellent.
Excuse me, please, if these my words sounded rude. I didn't want it.

And the last moment (if you will allow). Yes, you are right, the style of Chopin is recognizable here. If it was your goal you completely reached it. However I have never been able to understand for what to imitate strange styles before mastering the own one. I think you are very talented. Your own style (I guess) will be very bright and interesting.
I wish you to reach success and to write a lot of good compositions.

P.S. I'm sorry for my English.  

 

My own style is developping day after day 🙂
I'll be able to share soon an other composition where I try to not imitate any other composer